Still alive, still writing
Went to Boston for six days to visit friends–didn’t write while there but filed away notions for a horror story based on the smell of the room we stayed in: old wood. The B & B was actually pretty nice, but the smell was inspiring.
Anyway, back to the revisions. Combing through for places where dialog could replace a reference to dialog at this stage, while trying to keep straight what gimmicks I’ve used. Did I have Ray wave food around for emphasis before? It’s been a while.